Sunday, June 18, 2006

My Mom

Today its been 8 years since I lost my Mom. But her blessings and strength to live life to its Best come what may, will always remain with me. This poetry is in fond remembrance of her...

My Mom

She was a pillar of strength,
a pillar that would never collapse
My days cannot pass without remembering her
Even with the vast time lapse.

Her biggest ornament was her reassuring smile,
which she wore in the toughest times
Inspite of many a Up & Down,
she’d never loose hope & never would frown!

Her mirth we all required,
and she bathed us with smiles of glee.
She gave us all the liberties,
but efficiently held our family tree.

Our wishes were always fulfilled,
and to do so, to any extent would she go!
She was so responsible and understanding,
I will always follow the right path that she’s show.

She’d been an ideal woman,
be it as a MOTHER, a sister or a wife.
Never would anyone have a MOM like mine,
so beautiful and full of life.

I can now see her amongst the stars,
smiling through the clouds so high.
Praying to God for our well being,
and then waving us a sweet goodbye.

So lovable and kind was she,
her memories will always remain.
They will forever be cherished,
and none in the world can replace the same.

She was the bravest warrier,
in the battle field of life.
Without her around anymore,
life feels like a perpetual strife…



At 8:59 PM, Blogger mattu said...

awesome....after reading this i somehow can relate ur smile to ur moms.....i think i can see her smile in u.
Am sure she was a pillar of strength....
very well written....and touching.

At 2:57 AM, Blogger HP said...

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At 4:22 AM, Blogger HP said...


Never knew this and I am sorry abt the irrepairable loss..

Well, they say that one can never completely leave a place. A small part of you stays there while you also carry a part of the place with you..

The same is with death. When someone leaves this planet, they do leave their fragrance back which make our lives more meaningful and beautiful. And they take some part of our lives with them which always leaves a gap in our lives..

Thought and wrote a few lines about death on Friday but then just threw it away..

U expressed ur feelings beautifully...

Keep Inkin!!


At 10:21 PM, Blogger Kurt said...


am really short of words to describe your post. Truly a masterpiece(to me atleast), coz it touched me somewhere deeeeep inside........


At 10:57 PM, Blogger Abhi said...


I was never aware of this.I am sorry to hear it.

Ur words speaks it all.

"I can now see her amongst the stars,
smiling through the clouds so high.
Praying to God for our well being,
and then waving us a sweet goodbye."

Yes,it touched me.

An excellent post Buddy.


At 5:19 AM, Blogger Ziom said...


I don't know when did u posted that comment on my blog. Infact even i don't visit my blog frequently, forget about others :D

ne ways, nice poem gurl, i don't even remember when did i last appreciated my mom, i guess thats what a mothers love is, its selfless :)

At 12:14 PM, Blogger RJ said...

nicely written..this was recommended by kurt long time back..i just got a chance to read it..its a class act!


At 10:13 AM, Blogger Tushar Sathe said...

felt really sorry after reading it, but you write beautifully.. cheers!

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